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All For You by ~dead-poetic-vices:icondead-poetic-vices:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


She's the most beautiful girl in the world
She's everything you've ever wanted
Everything you've ever wanted to be
Everything you are not

When she smiles at you
With the smile
The one that she gives only you
You freeze in the moment
And feel like the only person in the world
The only one around
It's just you and her

The look in her eyes
It's only for you
She only looks that way at you
And you wonder why
You wonder how could this be
And it makes you afraid

She opens her mouth to speak
You anticipate the words
You fear what she's going to say
The air is still and silent
Time freezes and everybody's waiting
Watching you and her
But she's the only one you see

Her lips form the word
You tense
"Freak," she shrieks.
An ugly sound on beautiful lips
And it's all for you

She's the most beautiful girl in the world
She's everything you've ever wanted
Everything you've ever wanted to be
Everything you are not
©2008-2009 ~dead-poetic-vices
:icondead-poetic-vices:

Author's Comments

Journal 7 for Mojo's class. My contrasting themes are beautiful and ugly with a little bit of love and hate...

It isn't the final version because it kind of bothers me at the moment....

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~TwilightThunderWolf Dec 10, 2008, 5:45:25 PM
She is going to love this. I still don't have my life poem done.

--
Wolves will be wolves and humans will be humans. It takes a real being to see the others part.
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~dead-poetic-vices Dec 10, 2008, 6:04:00 PM
I need to edit mine...which is going to be hard. But I love the last stanza...

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
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~News-From--The-Front Dec 10, 2008, 6:09:37 PM
so why the hell do i think this is about me....and it was submitted like the day this would happen..

thanks...thanks for bringing back what i thought i killed..

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watchz the town frum abuve, yez u and me..
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~dead-poetic-vices Dec 10, 2008, 6:11:59 PM
Topher, what happened?

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:iconnews-from--the-front:
~News-From--The-Front Dec 10, 2008, 6:30:10 PM
to much pain for this small deviation chat to hold that for sure......

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watchz the town frum abuve, yez u and me..
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~dead-poetic-vices Dec 10, 2008, 6:34:49 PM
Does this mean I can call you?

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
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~News-From--The-Front Dec 10, 2008, 6:36:46 PM
nothing is gunna happen much cuz im just gunna stay silent...i dont feel like talking at all..

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watchz the town frum abuve, yez u and me..
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~dead-poetic-vices Dec 10, 2008, 6:39:24 PM
Silence is good. As long as you're not slitting your wrists on the other line...that should be fine.

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
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*DeathIsMine18 Dec 10, 2008, 6:41:19 PM
i really really love this..like alot, i usually would have some kind of constructive thing to say, but i dunno, this piece is really touching, and i love it, it reminds me of myself, but somehow, instead of making me feel like shit like it usually would, it makes me feel...understood? -shrug- i dunno, im probably just some idiot saying mindless pointless stuff, but ya, great job ^_^

--
If heaven and hell decide
That they both are satisfied
Illuminate the NO's
On their vacancy signs

~Maya~

P.S. press it you know you want to! [link]
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