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It was just another cliché scenario
Another romance song on the radio
And the singer's talking 'bout her hero
And a guy in the crowd is singing along
It's another thing they'll never know
This another one that's become their song

Where the guy gets the girl and runs away
And they don't care what this world has to say
And they say they’ll die for each other’s love
It’s another Romeo and Juliet life's thought of

It’s by chance not fate that they meet
Just mixed in with the strangers on the street
They happened to by knocked off their feet
And like that they both fell to the ground
All their things were scattered on the concrete
And when they looked up, a connection was found

Where the guy gets the girl and runs away
And they don’t care what this world has to say
And they say they’ll die for each other’s love
It’s another Romeo and Juliet life’s thought of

And like that the days became their own
Their nights were spent at each other’s home
And they told themselves that they’d never be alone
But this story can’t be their life’s perfect fairy tale
The arguments started with just a few words on the phone
Their relationship was strained to the point it just fell

And the guy doesn’t get the girl and runs away
They start to believe in what the world has to say
As sudden as they started, they ended their love
It was another Romeo and Juliet that life thought of

It was just another cliché scenario
Another romance song on the radio
And the singer's talking 'bout her hero
And a guy in the crowd is singing along
It's another thing they'll never know
This is another one that's become their song
©2008-2009 ~dead-poetic-vices
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And this can't be their life's perfect fairy tale

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:iconrosegymnast:
its very well written. but the change of the rhyming pattern kinda throws you off..
but all in all it's pretty good!

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I told my friend he made things so difficult.
He said, ""Life's supposed to be difficult...You get more out of it when it is."
:icondead-poetic-vices:
Thanks Em!

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:iconthundersin:
Omg, I really, really, really ,really, really, really, really ,really, really loved it, it was AWESOME!!! Loved it!! =3

Oh btw, I dunno if it's a mistake or not but in this phrase "They happened to by knocked off their feet" is by supposed to be, be?

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And I take my time, and I let them grow,and I spread my wings, and I hope, oh how I hope, you'll let me go, because when your gone, and it's too late, how do you think I will deal with it? How do you think I will feel?
:icondead-poetic-vices:
I didn't see that! Thank you for pointing it out!

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:iconthundersin:
np! :D (again awesome writing!!)

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And I take my time, and I let them grow,and I spread my wings, and I hope, oh how I hope, you'll let me go, because when your gone, and it's too late, how do you think I will deal with it? How do you think I will feel?
:iconlurveeyouu:
wowww, this is so good. I absaloutely love the 'And the guy doesn’t get the girl and runs away
They start to believe in what the world has to say...' verse, absaloutely amazing.

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for never was a story of more woe, than this of Juliet and her Romeo.

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