Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


It's like this
With the way you are
Sometimes you go too far
In this twist
Of push and shove
War in love

Sometimes I hate you
The way you hate me
What are we to do?
Who do you want to be?

It's like salt
The way we both wound
It's always too soon
One more match
Of yelling and screaming
The tears always streaming

Sometimes I hate you
The way you hate me
What are we supposed to do?
Who do you want to be?

It's insane
The ways we both go
Because we'll never know
Wrong from the right
And what we're supposed to feel
It wasn't meant to be real

Sometimes I hate you
The way you hate me
What are we supposed to do?
Who do you want to be?

Just another game
Of played victim vs. accused
Our hearts are bruised
Never look back
The past isn't light
Our future isn't bright

Sometimes I hate you
The way you hate me
But I'll always love you
You're everything to me
©2008-2009 ~dead-poetic-vices
:icondead-poetic-vices:

Author's Comments

Sometimes I hate you
The way you hate me
But I'll always love you
You're everything to me...

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconiwannaburnstuff:
Sometimes I hate you
The way you hate me
What am I supposed to do?
Who do you want me to be?

it also kinda works this way... but I can't seem to get the rhythm correct...
:iconthundersin:
Yet again, another master piece, Its really good especially how you were able to fit in "Sometimes I hate you
The way you hate me" perfectly its truly amazing how you make these

--
And I take my time, and I let them grow,and I spread my wings, and I hope, oh how I hope, you'll let me go, because when your gone, and it's too late, how do you think I will deal with it? How do you think I will feel?
:icondead-poetic-vices:
Thank you!

--
You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:icondead-poetic-vices:
That's what I had at first but it didn't really sound right...

--
You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:iconiwannaburnstuff:
yeah, I see what you mean, it's that last line...
:icondead-poetic-vices:
yeah.

--
You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art

Details

May 23, 2008
1.2 KB

Statistics

6
8 [who?]
122 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map