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Whispers so clearly
They grow through the night
But no one can hear them
They're lost in the light

There's a boy
His blue eyes sparkling
But he can't see
The blue sky darkening

And no one
Ever cared
And no one
Ever saw
The people within

Voices of melody
They're breaking the silence
But no one can hear them
This doesn't make sense

There's a girl
She speaks with her hands
She's always known
That no one understands

And no one
Ever cared
And no one
Ever saw
The people within

Whispers so clearly
They grow through the night
But no one will heed them
They're lost in the light...
©2008-2009 ~dead-poetic-vices
:icondead-poetic-vices:

Author's Comments

Voices of melody
They're breaking the slince
But no one can hear them
This doesn't make sense...
--

Last verse goes to Robert. He owns it. :iconiwannaburnstuff:

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:iconiwannaburnstuff:
Whispers so clearly
They grow through the night
But no one will heed them
They're lost in the light...

It's very good.
:iconevil-genius-bj:
Very nice... I do believe I'll favorite this

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Who heals the healer?
:iconthundersin:
Omg, this is beautiful I love this!!!!

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And I take my time, and I let them grow,and I spread my wings, and I hope, oh how I hope, you'll let me go, because when your gone, and it's too late, how do you think I will deal with it? How do you think I will feel?
:icondead-poetic-vices:
I think I'll add that verse at the end.

--
You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:icondead-poetic-vices:
Thank you!

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:icondead-poetic-vices:
Thank you!

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:icondead-poetic-vices:
Did it.

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You gave me a picture
I gave you a poem
I gave you words
And you gave me art
:iconiwannaburnstuff:
cool, and you gave me credit, no less :)

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